Friday, September 7, 2012

Midas Journal 13




Entry: Apr 16
Part 2

Okay, now the real reason I'm writing this is because of what happened this afternoon. Before today, Aden and I hung out a couple of times, on Tuesday and Thursday. I introduced him to Carla at lunch, and he flirted with her a little bit. She didn't mind, and I was glad to have her not teasing me for once. We talked a lot, and at the lunch table, and I got to know him pretty well. He's into gaming..pen and paper RPGs, that kind of thing. And apparently Tina's also in his group that meets every other weekend, which I guess means Tim was before. There's a lot more stuff I found out about his interests and all, but I don't want to go into too much detail about all that stuff.

So. This afternoon. Aden offered to buy me some ice cream at a local-run shop, he said it was really good stuff, and it was. We got the ice cream, and we were on our way to his house because he wanted to show me some stuff. He had barely started his cone, he finished a story he was telling from one of his games, and then he said something. He said, "You know, Kael, sometimes I really wish I could do magic. I mean, I know it's not real and all, but it would be so cool to be able to throw around fireballs or make crazy elaborate illusions. What about you?"
"I kind of like magic not being real," I said. I was being perfectly honest about that.
"Aw, c'mon, I'm sure there's some power you'd love to have, just to play around with for a little while," he said, and gave one of those friendly fake punches to my arm with his free hand. "Huh?"

I looked at him, and I noticed it at the same time he did. Well, he noticed some kind of black material wrapping itself over his knuckles, and starting to grow. I noticed that all of a sudden my sense was telling him he would turn into a girl if he touched me. Oh man, was all I could think. Now what?

The material quickly wrapped itself around his hand and up his wrist a little bit, ignoring the outer half of his fingers. "Well, this feels weird," he said, and I saw the material squeezing his hand and fingers into a much smaller, skinnier shape, and even the exposed parts of his fingers shrank. Two things that looked like miniature belts appeared on top of the wrist of the, gloves I guess, and then from the wrist up his whole arm started shrinking, the hair on it disappearing. His t-shirt's sleeve pulled in until his shoulder was exposed.
"Scratch that. This is weird," he said, looking at his arm and turning it around. "Whoa.." Then he started to lose height, and his shirt started to get tighter and longer at the bottom. I could see the middle of the shirt separating, buttons appearing to hold it together, and the collar growing and folding itself over. And then his other sleeve pulled in to match the first one, and his arm started shrinking too. For some reason he put the ice cream cone in the already-changed hand, and watched the one that was changing as the same black material as before showed up at the edge of his wrist and grew down the hand into a matching glove.
"Huh..wow," he said. I could hear his voice starting to change now. He looked down at his lower body, moving his head back and forth to try and get a better look at what was going on. Thanks to the tight shirt I could see his stomach shrinking in and his hips growing, and now his pants split at the thighs, the top part turning white all at once while the bottom turned black. The top part shrank up a few inches and started getting vertical creases on it, and some kind of straps made their way up from the leggings, which were now squeezing his legs into a very slim shape. "So I'm gonna..?" he started, in a voice that still sounded like a guy's, but barely, and paused, getting a weird look on his face. "Oh. Yes, apparently." His, or I guess her, voice rose into the girl range now.
"Whoa," she said, and I looked up to see Aden's face quickly shrinking and shifting, his hair suddenly turning from dark brown to bright blond and growing out, covering his forehead in the front, framing his face on the sides, and reaching as far as his waist in the back. He blinked once, and suddenly his eyes had turned this bright yellow color. Then a red tie appeared in the middle of his shirt's collar and grew down to about the middle of his stomach, and the motion drew my attention to two small bumps now on her chest, still growing and stretching the tight shirt farther out. Or, I dunno, maybe the shirt was growing there.
"Oh? Wow," she said. Her voice was really high now, even for a girl, almost at risk of being squeaky and annoying..but not exactly that high. And then I noticed her ears. They were getting big, and growing fur, like Rhia's had, but not in exactly the same shape. The fur was the same color as her hair, except for a white tip on each. There was some motion in my peripheral vision, and I looked down to see a big, bushy tail in the same color, with the same kind of white tip. I have no idea when that appeared. And by the time I looked up again there was some kind of blue hat on her head, sitting awkwardly behind the big triangular ears, and her boobs looked pretty much full.


"Phew, is it over?" she said, looking over herself again, taking the tail in one hand and looking at it for a second or two. She got an excited look in her eyes. "Man, that was crazy! Look at me, I'm a fox-girl! Huh?" She paused a couple of seconds, and I'm pretty sure I knew why. I could feel another copy-of-memory thing happening, and suddenly I knew she was Adena, knew I had met her under the same conditions and all but as a girl, with the same animal ears and tail. Since I'd only really met her this week, my memories weren't all that effected, but I knew it was a pretty big deal for her.

Finally, she said, "...Okay, wow. All of my wow. Did you do this?" She seemed mostly amazed about it still, but kind of happy.
"..Err, sort of. Not on purpose. I can explain somewhere more private."
"Okay, c'mon!" She grabbed my hand and started half-running in the direction of her house. I was glad to find out she wasn't super strong like Lue, but I followed her anyway, and in a couple of minutes we came to her house and she led the way inside.

"Okay..I'm pretty sure my parents aren't here, so this should be private enough," she said, closing the front door and moving to the middle of the living room. "So, I have powers now. Like, awesome powers. Check this out!" She put her right hand out, palm-up, and a yellow-colored fireball appeared hovering over it for a few seconds.
"Uh..maybe don't do that around flammable stuff."
"I know, I know! It's just so cool. But--so you said you did this somehow?"
"..Yeah. About, a month ago was my eighteenth birthday, and since waking up that morning I sometimes turn guys into girls when I touch them. I don't really understand how or why it works, but I thought I'd at least learned to sense whether that would happen or not..."
"I was about to say. You've touched me plenty of times, what makes this one special?"
"I don't know. When I first met you it didn't 'feel' like anything like that was going to happen. And for some reason it seems like everyone it happens to is just really happy about it. I don't get that, either. I mean, I can use the power on myself to go back and forth, but as far as I can tell it's just..weird switching genders."

"Hm..yeah, you're right. It is weird. But the reason I'm happy with this doesn't have anything to do with being a girl. It's because it came with awesome powers. Like, watch this." She made a tossing motion off to her left, and suddenly she was standing over there. I did a double take to see that there were apparently two of her. The original went over to the 'new' one and waved her hand around inside it, and it shimmered like some kind of movie hologram. Then the copy disappeared. "Actually..hey. I think I get it!"
"You do?"
"Yeah. Your power grants wishes!"
"Uh.."
"No no, hear me out. Just before you changed me into what I looked like now I was talking about how I'd like to be able to do magic. Specifically fire and illusions. Right?"
"Yeah.."
"And when I turned from Aden to Adena, what kind of powers did I get?"
"..Oh."

I sat down and sighed, hand on my forehead. She came up in front of me and leaned forward a little. "What? What's wrong with that?"
"Okay, look. The other thing I've noticed about my power, other than what I've already told you, is that every time I've turned a guy into a girl they..act kind of attracted to me. Especially at first. Meaning if you're right about my power granting wishes..the trade-off for granting someone's wish is supposed to be getting turned into an attractive girl, and..ugh, I don't even want to think about it."
She sat on the couch next to me, but not uncomfortably close. "Well, I didn't feel especially attracted to you. I mean, you're pretty good-looking but I still don't really feel like we need to be more than friends, you know? What if it was just a rush of hormones or something?"
"Okay..but if you were coming up with powers, and made up a power that could grant other people's wishes while making them girls, why else would you do that?"
"Well obviously nobody came up with your powers. You sure didn't, right?"
"Yeah, but for something as specific as this I get the impression somebody must have made up all the rules."
"Eh, maybe." She got back up again. "I think you need to relax a little, take your mind off that stuff for a while. C'mon, I have some old cards to show you."

So, long story short: I tried to make a new male friend, I ended up turning him into a girl, too, and finding out more terrible things about my powers. I just hope I can get them under control soon so this kind of thing won't happen anymore.

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Alright, so. Here's the deal. This is a story that I've never had any particularly solid long-term ideas for. I think it up, and write it, in a one-scenario-at-a-time kind of format. And I'd really like to have some more scenario ideas to work with. So, as of this entry, I am taking suggestions for what should happen next in Midas Journal. If you have a suggestion, please post it in a comment to the most recent one (which of course is this one as of this writing). There is no guarantee that suggestions will be used, but if I do use yours I'll be sure to credit you up top for the idea.

13 comments:

  1. I would just like to say i love the newest addition to the Midas Journal, however I am incredible not creative so I cant help with any ideas to help you. However i will be here to let you know what i think of anything new you post. Your stuff is the best and it is always enjoyable to read. Hope you can find some more ideas soon.

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  2. Well I do have a bit of an imagination, so how about someone showers and uses some body wash that transforms a man into a woman?

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  3. He is hanging out with a bunch of guy friends in the park playing football and then 2 touch him and they transform into girls.

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  4. A popular one with Japanese TG writers is the Ballet Dancer Transformation then being forced to dance

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  5. I'm starting to think that what I was asking for wasn't really clear enough...

    While I appreciate and will credit you if use your idea for them, I have plenty of ideas for captions in general. What I'm asking for here is specifically ideas of how I can carry forward the story in Midas Journal. I feel like I've set up a lot of characters so far, and would like to do things with them. I certainly can, and probably will, introduce more characters, but I'd like to also use the ones I've got a bit more.

    So I'm looking for what kinds of things you think could happen between the characters that are already here, in addition to possible ways of bringing in more of them.

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  6. I'd like to see one where someone asks to be changed back.

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  7. Doesn't Rio talked about being only a apprientice why don't we met Rio's Magic Teacher? So Him/Her can explain Kaels power, and maybe teach him how to control it better.

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  8. People are gonna hate me for this, but i'd like to see an involuntary f2m. :P. It's just my thing.

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  9. Well, I always wondered what would happen if Kael got a girlfriend. How would she react to his powers? How would his friends react? It could be interesting.

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  10. hmm... make a good story, since you set up a god cast of char with powers, maybe make em go to an adventure or something? google= Touhou if you need inspiration lolz

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  11. Lue persuades him to go shopping with her as a girl again, only this time, Kael (as Kayla) runs into a guy who doesn't give him/her that "six sense" feeling. Instead, he seems to like her and even Kayla starts to feel attracted to him! Feel free to work with that however you want, this is just a basic scenerio for you to work with.

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  12. I like 2 commenter ideas. The where he finally meets Rio's teacher, and where he goes to the mall as Kayla and falls in love with a guy.

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  13. Yes the one where Kayla falls in love was my own post. I'm just the weird guy who agrees with himself, likes his own youtube comment, all that. I'm just a weirdo.

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