Episode 52: All the Black Pawns
The drive to the city was long, but it would be worth it today. After
repeatedly being told not to get his hopes up, Marcus was finally
invited to—well, not exactly their headquarters but at least
someplace run by the VI for an in-person interview, and "maybe
some tests". Until and unless they actually rejected him, his
hopes were firmly in the "up" position. The world was on
the brink of ending, and this nerd was going to—possibly—have
a chance to be a part of the group trying to stop it.
He hadn't lied on the physical examination. Well—that wouldn't have
done any good anyway, he'd signed off on giving them access to his
medical records. There wasn't that much there, just that he was an
overweight loser (more or less) at risk of an early-ish heart attack.
But for the moment, he was still young and maybe there was time to
prevent that. It didn't seem like his physical prowess was what they
were after anyway. It was hard to tell what they wanted, from
all the questions in the interviews. Like, there had to be twenty of
had he ever wished he could...? and at least ten different
versions of what would he do if he could...?
The rock station he listened to on the road had a DJ in the morning
who occasionally interrupted with news about the black monsters'
attacks and the VI's heroics. It was through that medium that, about
halfway through his trip, Marcus learned that Dawn had been killed.
The car was filled with words of anger and disappointment for the
next few minutes or so, before he settled down and focused on the
road again. It wasn't too crowded this time of day—just a bit
before lunchtime—but it never hurt to be at least a little careful,
right?
After checking the mirrors and looking well ahead, Marcus turned his
attention to the peripheral for just a moment. Were there any deer
about to jump out into his headlights—well, no, they were off right
now, but—figuratively speaking? No, but...was that a person up
ahead on the left side of road? Two, three, five people? There was
something a little...off about them, he thought. As he came closer,
it was increasingly clear why. First: No clothes. Second: None of
the—let's say—features of a human being which a lack of clothes
would be expected to reveal, either? Third—and this as he came
right next to them and passed them by—no faces. Skin like plastic.
Okay, that wasn't normal, mannequins on the road? Marcus had
time to think this just briefly before he instinctively checked his
rear-view mirror once more and saw them walking across the street
behind his car, to the other side. It wasn't a monster; they
weren't attacking him or his car after all, and even politely waited
for him to pass before crossing. So...what was it? Well, it was
definitely weird, and that was enough for him. Marcus grabbed
at his phone, committing a small driver's sin for the sake of
hopefully being a helpful person for once in his life.
"911, what's your emergency?"
"Uh, hey, there's..like, walking mannequins? On the road? Just..like...going across it," Marcus said, feeling that he sounded increasingly stupid with every word.
"Where are you, sir?" The operator sounded serious. Now that was probably a change, he thought; a couple of weeks ago this kind of call would be ignored or laughed off, or at worst result in a policeman showing up at the caller's house to search it for drugs. He quickly rattled off the name of the road he was on, and the last mile marker he remembered seeing.
"911, what's your emergency?"
"Uh, hey, there's..like, walking mannequins? On the road? Just..like...going across it," Marcus said, feeling that he sounded increasingly stupid with every word.
"Where are you, sir?" The operator sounded serious. Now that was probably a change, he thought; a couple of weeks ago this kind of call would be ignored or laughed off, or at worst result in a policeman showing up at the caller's house to search it for drugs. He quickly rattled off the name of the road he was on, and the last mile marker he remembered seeing.
There was a short pause. Then: "How many did you see?"
"Uh-umm. Like five or six, I think, they were behind me and there's a lot of trees so—" he cut off as his car crested a hill over a relatively clear patch of land. "Uhhh. Scratch that, I just—I'm right next to like, gotta be twenty or thirty of 'em at least. They're just...standing there, waiting for my car to pass, and then...crossin' the road."
"Uh-umm. Like five or six, I think, they were behind me and there's a lot of trees so—" he cut off as his car crested a hill over a relatively clear patch of land. "Uhhh. Scratch that, I just—I'm right next to like, gotta be twenty or thirty of 'em at least. They're just...standing there, waiting for my car to pass, and then...crossin' the road."
There was a substantially longer pause than before. Marcus wasn't
sure if his call had been dropped or if he should say something else,
and just when he was about to ask, a new voice on the other end said,
"Listen carefully. Whatever you do, do not engage them or
interact with them in any way. Get away from them and reach your
destination as quickly as you safely can."
"Uh—o-okay. Got it," he said, nodding to nobody.
"Thank you for your report. Be safe." The new voice hung
up, leaving Marcus with just the sound of the radio again.
Chandra was in Frank's office again, along with his secretary. Her
computer was on one side of his desk, turned toward the center of the
desk where those present could more or less see it, displaying a
rudimentary heat map. "They seem to be split into two distinct
groups, one headed for us and the other toward them," she said,
pointing at the city on the map, then Light's town. "It's tough
to tell how many repeat-counts we're getting from different callers,
but even our lowball estimates...aren't good. Even unarmed, that many
is too much for all the law enforcement agents we've got available in
either town."
Frank nodded seriously, furrowing his brows. "Still no violent
action?"
She shook her head. "One caller a few minutes ago said he'd shot
a few down before they got a hold of his rifle and tossed it to one
side, and then just shoved him over and walked away."
He shook his head and sighed. "Got their sights set on a seige.
It's not inconceivable that she's been distracting us with the
imitation powers, all the while getting this ready to go."
"What I don't understand is what she wants now,"
Chandra said. "If she just wanted to kill people she'd be doing
it. This seems like the windup to a, threat or an ultimatum."
"I suppose we can only wait and see. But—if there's going to
be an attack on this scale..."
Frank turned to his secretary. "I think we'll need more than
just our trump card."
"Sir." Opal nodded, dialing a number before handing him the receiver.
"...Corporal."
"Sir." Opal nodded, dialing a number before handing him the receiver.
"...Corporal."
Emma left class early in a state of confusion and worry. Thankfully,
at least one friendly face was waiting out in the halls. "Amory!
What's going on?" she said, half-running over to him.
"You, haven't seen the news?" he said.
"You, haven't seen the news?" he said.
"No...one minute we're talking about Shakespeare, a-and the next
thing I know they're evacuating the school!"
"Well, ah..this." He turned his phone screen where she
could see a video cutting from one clip to another, one shaky phone
camera to another, and one or two distant traffic copter's in the
middle. Each view showed several faceless puppets trudging along.
"This is what's going on. I guess the puppeteer decided to
really show her hand."
"Are they..attacking people? Can we, do anything about
it?" she said as quietly as she could manage—although most of
the other students had already filed out of this part of the school,
and those left weren't paying attention to the two of them.
"Not yet." He dropped the phone back to his side. "And,
I thought I'd pick you up before heading to the graduate lounge to
meet with everyone else. Maybe get a conference call through to Rowan
or somebody over there. It's our town and the city they're
starting to surround," Amory said.
"L-let's go then," she said, giving what felt like at least
a somewhat determined nod. Comperehending the sheer number—the
magnitude of their enemy's actual power—was terrifying, but
not in a way that compelled her to run. If anything, the terror was
in the knowledge that, one way or another, she was going to go
out there and fight someone with such power.
He led the way out of their present building and toward the proposed
meeting place. It didn't take long for them to encounter an empty
hallway. "Do you, um. Know about what else has happened today?"
Amory asked with a touch of nervousness.
"No. I..I was, busy this morning," she said sheepishly, dreading any request for further clarification. "And then I came straight to class..."
He took a deep breath inward, and let it out: This was bad news. "She got Dawn."
"No..." Emma's expression deflated—if it was possible—further than before. "How? She was.."
"She just suddenly decided to leave and confront her, alone. The...going theory is that she convinced her to do it."
"Why?" She pulled her glasses off for a second with one hand and wiped some tears off with the opposite sleeve. "She..didn't deserve that. It..I only met her once, but.."
"I'm sorry I have to tell you," Amory said quietly.
"No. I..I was, busy this morning," she said sheepishly, dreading any request for further clarification. "And then I came straight to class..."
He took a deep breath inward, and let it out: This was bad news. "She got Dawn."
"No..." Emma's expression deflated—if it was possible—further than before. "How? She was.."
"She just suddenly decided to leave and confront her, alone. The...going theory is that she convinced her to do it."
"Why?" She pulled her glasses off for a second with one hand and wiped some tears off with the opposite sleeve. "She..didn't deserve that. It..I only met her once, but.."
"I'm sorry I have to tell you," Amory said quietly.
"No, no..it's..." Emma sniffed loudly, and then tried to
salvage a bit of dignity with a deep inward breath, restraining
herself from crying any harder. "It's my own fault. I get so
wrapped up in my own stuff, I don't really..pay attention to the rest
of the world sometimes. I should've known about it already, by now.
Right?"
"I wouldn't say 'should have'," he said gingerly. "I
really wish we didn't need to know about it. Or better, it
wasn't happening."
"Y-yeah.."
The phone on the desk rang. Sitting in front of it was a tall, older
man in military uniform. His dark hair was graying at the edges and
he sported a few wrinkles, but he looked to be in pretty good shape
for someone in his early forties—if you didn't count the
prosthetics taking the place of his right leg from the thigh down, at
least. His piercing, bright green eyes watched the phone ring once or
twice before he leaned up toward it, reaching forward and picking up
the receiever. "Frank."
"Corporal. Isn't this the base commander's office?"
"That it is. He's just stepped out for a moment." The
corporal took a moment to pull the chair closer so he could keep the
old, corded phone on him without constantly leaning forward. "I
was wondering when you might call."
"You're aware of the situation." Neither side elaborated on or responded to this, which amounted to a confirmation. Frank took a deep breath and exhaled again, just enough into the receiver for it to be heard on the other end. "How likely do you think it is we can get mobilization?"
"You're aware of the situation." Neither side elaborated on or responded to this, which amounted to a confirmation. Frank took a deep breath and exhaled again, just enough into the receiver for it to be heard on the other end. "How likely do you think it is we can get mobilization?"
"That would be what the base commander is busy with right
now."
"Really."
"You are aware we're in a declared state of emergency. Martial law isn't exactly in effect, but the military has been granted just a little autonomy to help deal with 'extraordinary threats' as they arise," the corporal said. "If this ain't one of those, I don't know what is. Now, I imagine you have a better sense of the numbers than we do at the moment. I have been given command of a pad and a pen to take down any logistics we need to know about. While you're at it, maybe you can get Officer Shepherd to recommend a deployment for me as well."
"Really."
"You are aware we're in a declared state of emergency. Martial law isn't exactly in effect, but the military has been granted just a little autonomy to help deal with 'extraordinary threats' as they arise," the corporal said. "If this ain't one of those, I don't know what is. Now, I imagine you have a better sense of the numbers than we do at the moment. I have been given command of a pad and a pen to take down any logistics we need to know about. While you're at it, maybe you can get Officer Shepherd to recommend a deployment for me as well."
"Of course." There was a pause which both sides understood
a nod to be occupying. "I'll hand you over to Chandra, then."
All of the vixens still alive in the city gathered in a single
conference room. Rowan, currently in fox form, got out her phone, set
it on the table in front of her, and sat quietly waiting for a minute
or two longer. Simon leaned slightly toward her. "So
ah...what're we waiting on?" he asked—almost exactly in time
for the phone to ring from an unfamiliar number. The blue-haired
vixen snapped it up to the side of her head, answering the call right
away.
"Hello, Rowan." A couple of the others already in fox-ears
recoiled slightly, showing signs of stress, sadness or outright rage.
She was—predictably—using Dawn's voice for this. Rowan herself
did not so much as flinch. "Do you, see now, what I am capable
of? I know, you have your, army. You understand: I have, mine."
"Tobias Mond. What do you want."
"Do you, really want me, to say? I would, cut off, anyone listening if, they...shouldn't know." There was a brief pause—the puppeteer maybe thought they were tracing the call. Rowan had determined this was unnecessary—and likely to be useless; she was smart enough to use a burner phone and a good long walk away from her real location for a call like this anyway. "I, want, her. Who makes us, strong. Who woke, the sleeping."
"Do you, really want me, to say? I would, cut off, anyone listening if, they...shouldn't know." There was a brief pause—the puppeteer maybe thought they were tracing the call. Rowan had determined this was unnecessary—and likely to be useless; she was smart enough to use a burner phone and a good long walk away from her real location for a call like this anyway. "I, want, her. Who makes us, strong. Who woke, the sleeping."
There was a brief look around—not even everyone who could hear the
call knew what she was talking about. Simon, who did, mouthed 'how
does she know?!', which Rowan just held up a hand to, shaking
her head. She had a guess as to the answer of that, but it was really
an irrelevant question right now.
"This one, was very rowdy, you know? Bring her, to the bit of, the forest she, blew up. If she will, come to me, quietly, then my puppets, will leave you, alone. If you, do not, they will kill, and destroy, everything in their path. Beginning, one hour, from now."
"This one, was very rowdy, you know? Bring her, to the bit of, the forest she, blew up. If she will, come to me, quietly, then my puppets, will leave you, alone. If you, do not, they will kill, and destroy, everything in their path. Beginning, one hour, from now."
"Do you believe that's long enough for her to even physically
reach that location?" Rowan asked, in a coldly neutral tone
of voice.
"I don't, care. That's what, your army is, for. Isn't it?" The phone hung up at this point.
"I don't, care. That's what, your army is, for. Isn't it?" The phone hung up at this point.
Rowan set the phone down again. For the benefit of those who didn't
have all of the information, or hadn't overheard the call, she said:
"She wants Amp, the individual whose power awoke everyone the
monsters put into comas. Amp is also capable of temporarily enhancing
the power of any other vixen."
"Well—that's...she can't have her, right?" Zeno said. "We don't negotiate with terrorists and stuff, right?"
"Now we know what she wants, what she has, what she's planning, and where she is." Rowan said, pulling up the VI app and going through the contacts. "That means we can form a plan." She patched in Frank, then Dr. Rory Quinn, and then set the phone into a waiting dock with speakers and a microphone that would allow all present to hear and speak effectively with the other callers.
"Well—that's...she can't have her, right?" Zeno said. "We don't negotiate with terrorists and stuff, right?"
"Now we know what she wants, what she has, what she's planning, and where she is." Rowan said, pulling up the VI app and going through the contacts. "That means we can form a plan." She patched in Frank, then Dr. Rory Quinn, and then set the phone into a waiting dock with speakers and a microphone that would allow all present to hear and speak effectively with the other callers.
In the university's graduate lounge, Rory took a moment to put her
phone on speaker, just after hearing some clicks on the other end. A
man's voice came through which none in that room quite recognized:
"Good afternoon, everyone. My name is Frank Smith. It seems that
all of the cards are on the table, so we can finally see who really
has the better hand."
"We have one hour before she begins the attack," Rowan reported. "Less, depending on how good her word is."
"We have one hour before she begins the attack," Rowan reported. "Less, depending on how good her word is."
"Time is short, then. But there should enough time for a few
introductions." Frank had patched in the commander of the
military base nearby; he briefly introduced himself as such before
going quiet. Everyone in the lounge except for the Quinns was in
vixen form, and introduced themselves using those names—Light,
Gemma (in her 'combined' form), Ning and Amp. Some of the empowered
ones with Rowan followed suit, one or two—including
Simon—introducing with both their "hero" names and real
names.
"I assume that Tobias—our puppeteer—made demands, then,"
Frank said.
"She knows about Amp," Rowan reported. "I think this is the Giver's doing. Wants her dropped off where Dawn was murdered."
"She knows about Amp," Rowan reported. "I think this is the Giver's doing. Wants her dropped off where Dawn was murdered."
In the lounge, a few concerned expressions were turned her way; the
fluffy vixen only tilted her head slightly, muttering a slight "Oh."
"Her 'soldiers' have a very slow method of transit, so she
hasn't finished surrounding either town just yet," the base
commander said. "We have everyone available en route, and a
significant advantage in weaponry based on what we've seen so far.
The numbers still don't look good, however."
"She will almost certainly send some of the puppets wielding
stolen power," Rowan said. "Hide them among the 'normal'
ones. Some will probably stay with her—and at least one will go to
await Amp. It is important to consider which ones. It is to be
expected that the one which can teleport will remain with her, in
case this gambit fails and an escape route is necessary.
Strategically speaking, at least one capable of harming large groups
of people at once should be expected in each location, and one of low
combat usefulness is likely to be assigned to wait."
"She has access to at least three different puppets that can
detect past my illusions," Light said. "Probably—one will
be in each location. Maybe the one with the blindfold waiting for Amp
in case I try to come with her—it's strong, but it only has melee
attacks."
"Fire and shadow are excellent crowd control," Rowan
continued. "One to each location. Dawn—possibly to remain with
her, as you say.
"The wind and the plant powers are the other two most likely for
crowd control. Plant may not work well with fire, and wind seems to
'cancel' lightning. So that pair at least is likely approaching your
location, Light."
"So—we need to decide who's going after her, then," Amp
said. "Right?"
"Correct. Ideally, we should leave some crowd control behind in each town, and a group who can deal with the powers we expect to see...but we need a strong team to fight against her and her puppets, as well. I nominate myself and Light, firstly—as the most skilled and experienced at fighting other vixens, respectively."
"'Experienced'?" Simon cut in, but was presumably waved off.
"Both of us also have capabilities which are effective against a large group if she's keeping some of the 'normal' puppets in reserve for defense. Additionally, if we can disable the elements able to sense through her powers, Light's illusions would be invaluable for catching her off-guard. Gemma would be also be ideal for overall versatility, especially in case some of our predictions were incorrect."
"Correct. Ideally, we should leave some crowd control behind in each town, and a group who can deal with the powers we expect to see...but we need a strong team to fight against her and her puppets, as well. I nominate myself and Light, firstly—as the most skilled and experienced at fighting other vixens, respectively."
"'Experienced'?" Simon cut in, but was presumably waved off.
"Both of us also have capabilities which are effective against a large group if she's keeping some of the 'normal' puppets in reserve for defense. Additionally, if we can disable the elements able to sense through her powers, Light's illusions would be invaluable for catching her off-guard. Gemma would be also be ideal for overall versatility, especially in case some of our predictions were incorrect."
"Ahem,"
Rory said. "The two of us should come along, too. She seemed
real interested in
my
power the last time I fought one of her puppets, so I could make a
decent distraction. And my husband's a healer, which is pretty
important to have in enemy territory, right?"
"...Agreed."
"I want to stay here," Ning stated. "I..I'm sorry if it's selfish or unhelpful, but..."
"I understand. You should anyway—we've, volunteered everyone else in your group to the strike team," Rowan realized aloud.
"...Agreed."
"I want to stay here," Ning stated. "I..I'm sorry if it's selfish or unhelpful, but..."
"I understand. You should anyway—we've, volunteered everyone else in your group to the strike team," Rowan realized aloud.
"Some extra support is coming your way from us," the base
commander cut in.
"Our trump card," Frank added. "Powers should work
very well alongside electricity, I think."
"Two more should be sent, then," Rowan said, "from
us."
"I'd
rather stay here, if it's the same to you," Simon said. "I
mean..all my stuff
is here."
"We need you here to fight large groups anyway," Rowan said with just a hint of a sigh. After a brief moment of further discussion, Tora and Fay were decided on to head over.
"We need you here to fight large groups anyway," Rowan said with just a hint of a sigh. After a brief moment of further discussion, Tora and Fay were decided on to head over.
"Question,"
Clark said, interrupting the flow of conversation for the first time.
"How are we carting people around, exactly?"
"Got some trasport choppers ready to go," the base commander said.
"Okay. And...if we use one of those to go to puppeteer, how exactly do we prevent her from hearing that and just teleporting far away? Or, if we drop out a ways off and then walk the rest of the way—same question, given she can see or 'sense' us even if Light's trying to hide us."
"Got some trasport choppers ready to go," the base commander said.
"Okay. And...if we use one of those to go to puppeteer, how exactly do we prevent her from hearing that and just teleporting far away? Or, if we drop out a ways off and then walk the rest of the way—same question, given she can see or 'sense' us even if Light's trying to hide us."
"Um...I
can mute sound," Gemma volunteered.
"A chopper?" said Rory.
"Not, like this. But...I think I could with um..help." She glanced in Amp's direction, and received a reassuring nod in return.
"A chopper?" said Rory.
"Not, like this. But...I think I could with um..help." She glanced in Amp's direction, and received a reassuring nod in return.
"I
can make any other vixen temporarily more powerful," Amp said.
"It's a...very
short range effect, but the results can be pretty impressive. I'm not
surprised she wants me if she knows what I can do, but I wonder
whether she knows all
of my powers."
"What,
there are others?" Simon said. "I mean, besides...?"
"Well, I'm very difficult to hurt. Different reason from Rory—the shadow monsters literally can't touch me, and nobody 'feels' like they want to attack me. But vixens especially—can't raise a hand against me," Amp said with a confident grin. "Their magic can't hurt me, either. As another answer to Dr. Quinn's question—she won't feel very inclined to leave if she thinks she's so close to 'having' me."
"Well, I'm very difficult to hurt. Different reason from Rory—the shadow monsters literally can't touch me, and nobody 'feels' like they want to attack me. But vixens especially—can't raise a hand against me," Amp said with a confident grin. "Their magic can't hurt me, either. As another answer to Dr. Quinn's question—she won't feel very inclined to leave if she thinks she's so close to 'having' me."
"You
sound like you have a plan," Frank commented.
"Bring me along and set me where I can walk the rest of the way to where she wants me," Amp said. "After I use my power on everyone I can, I mean. I'll present myself, she might stop the attack at least for a second or two and let her guard down while she has her puppet or puppets start leading me to her. If she does call off the attack for a second, the defenders can take advantage of that to thin her ranks by just keeping up the attack. Then—you strike, and so do I. I can't actually attack, but I do have a way of 'taking away' power just as I can enhance it. It'll probably get rid of whatever puppet she has 'escorting' me right then and there, so it can't come back to help her..well, depending on how it all works I'd say at least not right away. One less that can sense through Light's illusions, more than likely."
"Bring me along and set me where I can walk the rest of the way to where she wants me," Amp said. "After I use my power on everyone I can, I mean. I'll present myself, she might stop the attack at least for a second or two and let her guard down while she has her puppet or puppets start leading me to her. If she does call off the attack for a second, the defenders can take advantage of that to thin her ranks by just keeping up the attack. Then—you strike, and so do I. I can't actually attack, but I do have a way of 'taking away' power just as I can enhance it. It'll probably get rid of whatever puppet she has 'escorting' me right then and there, so it can't come back to help her..well, depending on how it all works I'd say at least not right away. One less that can sense through Light's illusions, more than likely."
"That
seems like a solid plan overall," Frank said. "Let's talk
logistics for a moment. The base is closer to us than they are to
you. So, we'll send everyone on the strike team and support for your
town your way, and then the rest of the strike team loads and heads
out. Think that'll work?"
After working out several more details, including the precise
placement of the vixens defending each town from the puppets to
coordinate with the troops and police forces, the call was eventually
hung up so everyone could get ready. Once Opal nodded to her boss
that they were off the line, he said, "Hope you don't mind my
borrowing your last name for the time being. I've been advised not to
share my full identity with everyone just yet, but I had to introduce
myself somehow."
"Heh. Quite alright, sir."
Man, this bit of the story is difficult to write. Think I've held onto most of this episode for half a year at this point, but the next part is what really makes me nervous. SO many moving parts to track. And trying to describe military stuff makes me especially nervous as I have basically zero knowledge when it comes to that, so a lot of it will probably be terribly incorrect.
"Heh. Quite alright, sir."
Man, this bit of the story is difficult to write. Think I've held onto most of this episode for half a year at this point, but the next part is what really makes me nervous. SO many moving parts to track. And trying to describe military stuff makes me especially nervous as I have basically zero knowledge when it comes to that, so a lot of it will probably be terribly incorrect.
Fighting a battle over a pretty girl? What is this, ancient Greece?
ReplyDeleteThe reference checks out especially well if you remember the whole thing started because of a powerful goddess offering an apparently friendly gift.
DeleteI'm still shaken by Dawn's death 7 months later....
ReplyDeleteI hope you get past the latest writer's block! I really enjoy BV! and I am eagerly awaiting the next chapter! I wonder when Amory is gonna visit the puppeteer...
Hey, I don't know if my comment got lost, so I'm sending another one. I really enjoy BV!, so I hope you get past the writer's block soon! Dawn was my favorite vixen, so I'm still shocked by her death (even 7 months later). I wonder when Amory is going to have a little "chat" with the puppeteer about what she did to Dawn in a dream.
ReplyDeleteHi,
Deleteyour earlier comment went through, but I have the blog set up so I have to see and approve comments before they show publicly. I can't speak objectively, but I feel like nobody wants this series to continue worse than I do. Over the many, many months since the most recent part I've slowly chipped away at the next one, knowing what exciting things are just around the corner if I can just get over this one, monumental, hump.
The biggest problems aren't really emotional or character-wise, they're logistical. There are all these people and moving parts in all these different places, and I have to make sure that what's happening both makes actual sense (and doesn't contradict itself), and gets communicated coherently in a linear sort of fashion and ends the way that it's supposed to. Or--it feels more like, the way that I "know" it does. I hope that makes sense. Doing that requires a kind of special focus on the story, which means that when my real-world obligations and other things I feel more like doing at any given time pull focus away, it becomes even more difficult to make progress.
But knowing that someone else does want to see it continue is some of the best encouragement for me to keep writing, as far as I'm concerned, so thank you.