So, a very long time ago I had the idea to write a series of captions about the inhabitants of a mysterious island, as told by one recent arrival. It was the first series of captions with any continuity between them (as far as I can recall) and probably also my first attempt ever to tell any sort of coherent story that spanned several transformations. It was supposed to either culminate in the entry describing the narrator's change or go through that at some point only to continue, but despite having three or four more captions partially written or planned I eventually more or less scrapped the entire idea with only three captions written.
Lately, as I have been feeling ambitious, I thought I might try and revive the series of captions as a story instead, with each entry being what would have been a caption before. So that's what this is. This particular post covers the first three entries, which are fully rewritten versions of the three Changing Island captions that did get finished and put out. Feel free to compare differences in writing, setting, events, so on as you like, but I do consider this to be much better written overall.
Hopefully I'll be inspired enough to write an Entry 4 and beyond that will actually be fully new, at least to everyone who isn't me, since a few of the partially written captions are planned to be incorporated as well.
Entry 1
My name is Lucas Jost. If you know me, I guess you can be happy that I'm okay, but it seems it's going to be a little difficult for me to get home, or for you to visit. I was on an expedition to the north, but our ship broke up in a storm and I was pretty sure I was going to drown or freeze to death. Instead, I woke up on the beach of a temperate island, completely unharmed.
This isn't an abandoned island, either.
But there is something strange about it. All of the inhabitants are
women, and say they used to be male. There are computers, clothes,
houses, and food and drink seemingly provided from nowhere. The
computers even have Internet access, from anywhere on the island,
which is how I'm able to put this up in the first place, but any site
that tries to identify the location of the computer mysteriously
fails.
It seems that efforts to work out where
this island would have to be by who's washed ashore here have also
failed, as people have shown up from all around the globe. It was bad
enough to think that I had gone from somewhere near the north pole to
a place as close to the equator as this would have to be to have the
weather it does. Those who live here (which I suppose includes me
from now on) call this place the Changing Island, for both its
apparent ability to change its location in the world and that which I
mentioned before, the change of those who live here.
Well, given my occupation (or, prior
occupation I suppose) I can't help a desire to try and chronicle
events here. It seems like a good place to start is with the stories
of the inhabitants, so I am taking some interviews and paraphrasing
accounts of the people who wound up here. I was debating how to
organize this, considering something more chronological, but the
more I think on it the more it makes sense to just list stories in
the order I learn them, beginning with that of their leader.
Her name is Najira; she doesn't exactly
govern in the sense that a king or prime minister does, she just
handles disputes and lays down general rules for behavior when
necessary. It seems more like something people expected of her and
she took on than her having declared for herself at any point.
Anyway, she washed ashore here five years ago as Naj; he had been
living in an apartment alone and scraping out a meager living with a
disproportionately large amount of work. He won a vacation on a
cruise ship in some sweepstakes, and about halfway through there was
some bad weather, and everyone was advised to stay inside. He went to
bed in his cabin that night, and woke up on this island's shore with
nothing but the clothes he'd gone to bed in...and barely that; they
were badly torn up.
Naj was the first person to arrive, so
there was nobody here to greet him. The first thing her did after
waking up was go farther inland, to look for civilization. What he
found was very unusual. There were several houses, well-made,
two-story, and apparently well-maintained, with plenty of food,
running water and electricity, but there was nobody in any of the
houses. They were also completely unlocked; in fact none of the doors
even had locks except the
bathroom doors inside. The houses' refrigerators and cabinets
were full of food, and because he was hungry, Naj took some. It was
very good. He spent the day exploring, but returned to the first
house he'd come to for lunch and dinner. Eventually the sun set, and
he went to one of the bedrooms in that house, took off his
mostly-destroyed outer clothes, and went to bed in just his boxers,
hoping that if someone did own this place, they would be
understanding.
The next morning Naj woke up with
aquamarine hair and purple eyes. Of course, he didn't know that until
he looked in the mirror. Also, his skin had somehow lost a lot of its
hair and all of its blemishes, even a birthmark on his wrist. It had
taken on a slightly paler, though not unhealthy, tone. He wondered if
there was something in the food or drinks here, but it hadn't killed
him, and he'd have to keep eating or starve. So he had breakfast.
Being alone and bored, after breakfast
Naj entered the library room in "his" house, and found
several bookshelves, each full of books on a particular topic
arranged alphabetically. One shelf was full of cookbooks, and he got
the idea to try and cook some of the recipes, figuring it would take
until he was actually hungry to make something decent. That turned
out to be about right.
He noticed about halfway through the
morning that he was brushing his bangs out of his eyes, and then that
his hair had grown out nearly to his shoulders, framing his face. By
the time he'd managed to make something edible his hair had become so
long that he could feel it all the way down his back. For some
reason, he had never thought to put back on his clothes from the day
before, and now that he did think
about it he went and looked for them where he'd left them, but
they were gone.
He looked around "his" house
a little more, and eventually found a bunch laptops in what looked to
be some sort of office. Turning one of them on, he found what I've
already mentioned—an Internet connection. But he didn't really have
anyone he wanted to contact, when he really thought about it, so he
just found some games to play, to pass the time. He was busy with
that until his stomach angrily growled, and when he looked around he
saw out the window that it was about sunset. He got up and paused,
noticing something felt different about his stance.
Indeed, he had ecome thinner, his
stomach especially, except his hips and upper legs were wider than
before, which explained why he had to place his feet differently to
keep balanced. His shorts had also changed a little too, becoming
tighter and shorter, and the colors had faded somewhat. He ate supper
and then, feeling unusually tired, went back to bed in "his"
room.
He woke up late the next morning, and
found that his body had changed shape even more: Now he was even
thinner, with narrower shoulders; his arms were slim and his hands
and feet had become smaller. He went over to a mirror and saw that
his face had become more rounded and feminine. He ran a hand across
his chin before something lower down caught his eye. He discovered
that his shorts had shrunk into a tiny white bikini bottom, and
further that it was snug and comfortably flat between his legs.
Naj told me that she blinked a couple
of times, put her fingers in the odd gap between her thighs, and then
finally said, "...Oh." At that point, she noticed that her
voice (which she hadn't used since yelling a couple of times in the
empty town and houses in an effort to see if anyone was there) had
become a very distinctly female alto tone. Almost as soon as she had
realized the change in sex, she felt a sudden outward push from her
chest, and made her second sound as a woman, a surprised "Aah!"
She watched, wide-eyed, as her nipples
rose up, followed by little bumps around them, followed by more of
the chest around that. Her face reddened and she crossed her arms
over the bumps, and felt them pushing forward against her arms as
they continued to grow. Before she could really process what had
happened, they had burst out into a pair of large, full breasts.
Najira describes what happened next in
terms of emotions. She felt happy somehow, as if she'd been set free
from her old life. It was at this point she felt like calling herself
by a new name, even though there wasn't anyone to introduce herself
by it yet. She found the dresser in her bedroom full of bikinis and
other feminine wear, including a top matching the bottoms she was
wearing; all of them matched her size exactly. So she put that on, in
case anyone else did show up. I interviewed her in exactly that first
set of clothes today, and have included a picture:
Curiously, I've seen old pictures of
her from near the time she first washed up on the island. She doesn't
look any older than those at all. Some of the girls here speculate
that the island's "magic" or whatever it is that changes
people also grants some kind of longevity, or at least a continually
youthful appearance. I'm hesitant to draw such a conclusion, though
it's certain a number of strange things are
going on.
Entry 2
My
second interview was with a relatively recent arrival to the island, from a few months ago;
her name is Danny. She used to be named Dan. I was given a picture of
how she used to look: Tall, fit, handsome. It seems at some point it
became a tradition to take "before" and "after"
photos of people who come to this island, though of course we have no
picture of Najira as Naj since he was the first here. I had my
"before" picture taken yesterday, in the rush of welcoming
and getting accustomed to this place, but I don't seem to have
changed any yet.
About
Dan. He was a surfer of the highest caliber, winning competitions all
over and getting enough local endorsements to live off of his
passion. It seems like he was on the cusp of becoming truly famous,
but he did have enemies in others envious of both his appearance and
his abilities. It seems he was participating in a certain competition
off the coast of Florida, but his board had been sabotaged. I'm
uncertain of the meaning of the technical terms, but apparently it
was impossible to remain standing on it because whatever they had
done had made it very slippery.
At any rate, he "wiped out"
terribly a bit too far out, most likely (according to Danny) hit a
rock with his head and passed out, and then awoke on the shore of
Changing Island. He had only two things with him when he first
arrived: His swimming trunks and his beloved skateboard, which was
mysteriously unharmed, in perfect condition in fact, and free of the
damage that whatever cheating competitor had done to it.
Dan was almost immediately greeted by
some of the earlier castaways—all women, of course. He asked if
there was "Nothing but chicks on this island," and they
told him about the changing.
He just shrugged. "Eh, that's
alright. If I'm a dude or if I'm a chick, 's long as I get to surf."
He meant that seriously; soon after meeting everyone he paddled his
way back out to the waves and spent the rest of the daylight surfing.
His skills were as impressive as ever,
and those who stuck around to watch enjoyed the show. But each time
he came back to shore he was a little shorter and smaller, and by the
end of the day his height had sunk by at least two and a half feet.
Since he didn't eat anything on the island until after sunset that
day, I suppose we can fully rule out the idea that the food or drink
that mysteriously appears here is responsible for people changing.
The next day he found that his hair had
turned blue and grown so long it was a little in his face. He asked
one of the girls for a hairband, and tied a bit of it up in a
ponytail off to the side—apparently that was easier. His skin had
become much paler, and his muscles were less visibly defined, though
he felt no less fit than before. After eating some breakfast someone
else in the house he'd been given made, he took his board and hit the
waves.
When Dan was eating lunch that day, one of the
girls asked if he could teach her to surf. Before long everyone at
the table was making the same request, and he finally conceded. He
still wanted to surf solo some of the time, though, so he agreed to
teach for a couple of hours in the morning, a couple in the
afternoon, and maybe occasionally pick a day to do nothing but teach
if he felt like it. It was enough to get everyone off his back so he
could go back out surf. His stomach was thinner by then, and (in
Danny's words) just as smooth as a recently-waxed surfboard. He
didn't seem to have any trouble surfing as he usually did, despite
the drastic differences that should have come to his weight and
balance.
By the time he came back that afternoon
to start teaching, Dan's hips had grown out, and his trunks had
become the bottom of a black bikini, which mostly fit aside from the
obvious glaring problem of being on a man. But his upper body—chest
up, including the face—was largely unchanged from after lunchtime.
While he was talking some of the girls through surfing basics, his
voice steadily rose in pitch, and his frame became narrower; his arms
and legs slimmed down a little more as well. When he got back to his
room that night, he noticed in the mirror that his face had gotten
smaller, smoother and overall more feminine, as well as his eyes
having changed color to match his hair.
He was about to walk away from the
mirror to shower, but then he had a slight odd sensation in his
chest. Danny told me that at this point she guessed it was about
"time to really turn into a chick," which turned out to be
correct. He stared at the mirror and saw the bikini bottom slowly
pull the rest of the way flat between his legs, followed by a pair of
bumps appearing on his chest. They grew slowly, but she kept watching
anyway since it was apparently an interesting process to see, and
this was not the kind of thing she'd get to see twice.
Once it finally seemed to be over,
Danny tells me, she felt very comfortable with her new form—it was
cute and attractive, but not overly so; people wouldn't bother her
because of jealousy over it. Apparently that was something Dan had
found irritating before, although my interview didn't really go into
depth on that. At any rate, after that she went on to shower, and
after that she discovered that the bikini bottom had been joined by a
matching top, a visor, and a jacket, all of which fit her new
appearance exactly. The next morning, this picture was taken:
I asked Danny (although the answer
seemed fairly obvious) whether she minded being turned female, or the
fairly extreme loss of height. She said, "Nah, dude, y'know. At
the end of the day, like, I don't really care what I look like or
sound like or any of that stuff. I live to surf, and as long as I can
do that, nothin' else matters." After that, she gave a small
salute and grabbed her board, running back outside to the beach. I
suppose I'm lucky she agreed to an interview at all.
Entry 3
Entry 3
Whatever
doubt I had, in light of the fact that nothing seems to have happened
to me yet, that this island changes people...well, it has been
dispelled. Late this afternoon, as I was walking along the beach
looking for a third person to round out tody's interviews, I
discovered another man freshly washed up on the beach, still
unconscious. I called out for some help in case she was injured,
though of course I was later told nobody ever washes ashore here with
injuries, even if they remember having been injured the last time
they were conscious. Either way, the first couple of people to show
up immediately went to get a photographer, which was apparently the
greater priority to them.
From our later interview, I learned
that she had been called Iryen, and had worked as an ornithologist.
He wasn't quite famous, but his work was extremely accurate and
moderately known, at least among people in his own field. Evidently
he had been studying some beach birds, when he encountered one he had
never seen before. He carefully followed this mysterious bird a short
way out into the water, hoping to get a picture or document something
about it that might help him either identify it or prove it existed.
Just when it seemed like he was close, the bird suddenly turned
around and dove straight at him. His last memory before washing
ashore was the bird being beak-first, hardly a centimeter from his
face.
Iryen woke up, and I offered a greeting
and a hand to help him up, which he took. He was still a little
disoriented, especially since as soon as he was standing someone came
with a camera and took a photo of him. No sooner had that happened
than a toucan swooped down and landed directly on his shoulder, as if
it were a tame bird.
Immediately Iryen started to visibly
change, his frame becoming narrower, his shoulders rounding off. He
hadn't been broad-shouldered before, quite scrawny actually, at least
his frame hadn't quite been feminine before. He shuddered, according
to my later interview due to an odd tingling in his upper body, as
his body hair pulled in, his skin smoothing over; his shirt
unbuttoned itself and split open. He shrank a little in height and
width, enough that his pants fell off, but his underwear stayed,
beginning to pull closer against his body. His hips widened, his
bottom grew, and his legs became curvier.
His hair grew out suddenly and a ribbon
appeared around some of it, jerking his head back somewhat. By now
his arms had thinned and shortened enough that his sleeves fell past
most of his hands; he held a hand up before his face and it was clear
to all that had changed, too. His hands were smaller, with slimmer
fingers, and his nails had even grown out a bit. He then let out a
surprised "Aah!" in what seemed to be a woman's voice as
his chest burst forward all at once into a pair of small breasts, and
then an even higher gasp at a strange, sudden pulling sensation from
between his legs.
No sooner did Iryen realize she had
become a woman than the photographer took another picture of what was
now a small, petite girl, who was still too disoriented and confused
by the whole situation to do more than give the camera and spectators
a wide-eyed stare.
After shaking herself out of it (which caused the bird to fly off of her shoulder and away), she buttoned back
up her shirt, her face bright red, and demanded to know what was
going on. The three or four people present other than me all started
talking at once, but then there was a loud "Yooo, chill!"
from off to one side. Danny walked up, having just surfed ashore to
all of this racket, and as soon as she understood that someone new
had washed ashore she waved the rest of us off and lead the new girl
aside to explain everything. Irya later told me that she was close to
panicking at first, but Danny took such an easygoing tone that she
soon calmed down enough to understand the explanation.
It seems on the way to her new house on
this island, Irya encountered a few specimens of the unusual bird
she'd seen before. The other inhabitants of this island, myself
included, didn't even notice anything unusual about it, but for
reasons that apparently even a common bird-watcher would know, it
really is a new species. She eagerly told me that it seems to be
native to this island, and she can't wait to begin studying it and
looking for any other new species here.
I asked her how she felt about her
sudden transformation (well, not in those words exactly), and whether
she minded being a woman now. She shrugged, saying that it was very
strange at first, but by the time Danny had finished explaining our
situation she had already begun to feel comfortable with it. She also
said that she hoped I would have just as easy a transition,
apparently believing the same thing would soon happen to me as well,
albeit possibly at a slower pace.
Every person on this island, even a
newcomer, seems certain that my own change is inevitable, and I have
a hard time coming up with any reason why it wouldn't be at this
point. I suppose I should brace for tomorrow, what I might find
different about myself when I wake up.
this is my favorite series!
ReplyDeleteglad to know that you decide to continue this series
Noticed a few grammatical errors, but other than that I'm looking forward to other entries.
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